Friday, March 30, 2012

Bright Lights


He didn’t hear the whirring until he woke up.  Apparently, he hadn’t heard much because when he opened his eyes, all he could see were bright overhead lights and the shadows of figures moving around his bed.  He noticed the restraints just as the whirring got louder and he was overcome by pain and darkness.


This is a story told in 55 words for G-man.
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  1. G-ManMarch 30, 2012 at 12:17 PM

    Alien Abduction?
    That person won't be able to sit for a month!
    Just teasing, very interesting story.
    Loved your 55
    This is what they should be, with just enough mystery.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  2. Alice AudreyMarch 30, 2012 at 12:48 PM

    What a nightmare! I visualize all kinds of ways he'd end up on the table - from an insane asylum to a torture chamber.

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  3. Yvonne OsborneMarch 30, 2012 at 12:58 PM

    Oh! Horrible. The scariest of the day. And a good example as the boss says.

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  4. Nara MaloneMarch 30, 2012 at 2:16 PM

    Ah the possibilities...aliens, home invasion, EMT's. None of them good options. Spooky write.

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  5. ScarletMarch 30, 2012 at 10:29 PM

    Mmmm....chilling...where can he be? Nice FF ~

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