Wednesday, May 23, 2012

Drift

drifting: dark, hopeless
waiting, immobile, afraid
will it ever end?


This was written for Sensational Haiku Wednesdays

7 comments:

  1. hold on! hope will descend like a dove! lovely haiku!

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  2. There is HOPE in the world...I hope you don't really feel this way....Very moving haiku

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  3. excellent contemplative haiku ~ well done ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  4. you showed fear and anxiety! well done.

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  5. Hope is near ... poignant but well described!!
    Lazy and Drifting

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  6. This is deep and powerful! Hang in there... all is not lost!

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