Wednesday, May 23, 2012

Drift

drifting: dark, hopeless
waiting, immobile, afraid
will it ever end?


This was written for Sensational Haiku Wednesdays
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7 comments:

  1. Tara TylerMay 23, 2012 at 9:06 AM

    hold on! hope will descend like a dove! lovely haiku!

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  2. joanneMay 23, 2012 at 9:09 AM

    There is HOPE in the world...I hope you don't really feel this way....Very moving haiku

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  3. carol l mckennaMay 23, 2012 at 12:40 PM

    excellent contemplative haiku ~ well done ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  4. AnonymousMay 24, 2012 at 1:34 AM

    Sad but beautifully crafted.

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  5. Tara TylerMay 24, 2012 at 7:47 AM

    you showed fear and anxiety! well done.

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  6. AnonymousMay 24, 2012 at 3:23 PM

    Hope is near ... poignant but well described!!
    Lazy and Drifting

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  7. michelleMay 24, 2012 at 6:13 PM

    This is deep and powerful! Hang in there... all is not lost!

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