Wednesday, May 16, 2012

Fire

Red embers beneath
flames of blue and gold. White hot.
Like my love for you.


This was written for Sensational Haiku Wednesdays

10 comments:

  1. It's the hidden embers you have to watch out for!

    Wreath of Fire

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  2. Excellent take on the word..

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  3. patriotic fire, full of proud colors & love!

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  4. very descriptive of 'Fire' ~ well crafted ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  5. Love that smoulders beneath the surface... unseen...

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  6. When reading your fab haiku, I pictured being w. a loved one in front of a roaring blaze...

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  7. Love can be like the drama of fire! Lovely!

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