Thursday, September 19, 2013

Too Soon

I feel faint,” was all she said. He rushed over to where she sat on the couch to help her, as he had done every time she needed him since she'd lost the use of her legs. He laid her down and then, as she lay in his arms, she took her last breath.


This is a story told in 55 words for G-man.

8 comments:

  1. Mijayami...
    Long time no see. Welcome back to the Friday Funfest!
    Loved your meloncholy 55
    Thanks for playing, and don't be such a stranger.
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  2. Goodness how sad, but it speaks strongly of love

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  3. Goodness how sad, but it speaks strongly of love

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