Thursday, November 10, 2011

Just a Moment


I’d been watching him for a few minutes before he noticed me.  He looked up as he passed and our eyes met.  We both smiled, cautiously but genuinely, before he was swept away by the crowd.  The subway doors closed, the train lurched forward and I revelled in the lingering happiness of a shared moment.


This is a story told in 55 words for G-man.
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  1. G-ManNovember 10, 2011 at 11:35 PM

    Oh yeah, thats one of lifes warming moments.
    Loved the subtle intensity of this...
    Loved your 55 My Friend
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  2. G-ManNovember 10, 2011 at 11:36 PM

    BINGO!!!!!
    Uno!!!
    Euchre!!!!

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  3. KBNovember 11, 2011 at 12:13 AM

    What a beautiful moment.

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  4. Brian MillerNovember 11, 2011 at 7:41 AM

    nice....love moments like this...something special just between two...

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  5. Alice AudreyNovember 11, 2011 at 10:35 AM

    Cool. Those moments are great.

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  6. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallNovember 11, 2011 at 11:46 AM

    love it,
    how cool to think of those moments,
    remarkable 55.

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  7. Monkey ManNovember 11, 2011 at 11:57 AM

    A bit of a romantic mystery.

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  8. BubbaNovember 11, 2011 at 12:16 PM

    These days it's harder to share such a moment (especially for men), because we're so afraid of being labeled 'creep' or 'stalker' when the truth is usually it's much more innocent. Sometimes it's amazing that people ever meet in real life.

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