Wednesday, November 9, 2011

Fleeting

Once upon a time
There was love neverending
Or so we believed


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  1. AnonymousNovember 9, 2011 at 10:04 AM

    Ooh, a little sad if you've lost that innocence!
    Cleverly written, I liked this a lot.
    Jamie

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  2. Tara TylerNovember 9, 2011 at 11:51 AM

    so sad when sweetness ends!

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  3. G-ManNovember 9, 2011 at 12:20 PM

    Don't give up!!!

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  4. The BraveNovember 9, 2011 at 3:35 PM

    sad

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  5. Magical Mystical TeacherNovember 9, 2011 at 6:37 PM

    Now THIS one makes me think...

    Thank you!

    Fleeting Soul Food

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  6. AnonymousNovember 10, 2011 at 1:53 AM

    Indeed thought provoking!We believe it to be never ending, but often we are alive to witness the end.. lovely haiku

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  7. SuzyNovember 10, 2011 at 4:08 AM

    Fleeting nicely portrayed. Thanks for visiting my blog.

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  8. Olive TreeNovember 10, 2011 at 5:59 AM

    I loved it! Nicely put together. I especially like the ending. Just don't give up on love, but be smart. "True" love is not fleeting. It's there to stay. The key is to understand that although the relationship may not work, the feeling is very real.

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  9. Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog?November 13, 2011 at 10:43 PM

    A bittersweet haiku indeed. Well crafted, and thought provoking.

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