Wednesday, January 11, 2012

Brilliance

so spectacular
but hidden by spectacles
and long eyelashes

twinkly and sparkly
a sign of new love and hope
on your ring finger

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  1. Tara TylerJanuary 11, 2012 at 10:01 AM

    i love the implied brilliance!

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  2. Olive TreeJanuary 11, 2012 at 10:52 AM

    Loved both of them. Brilliant work ;)

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  3. Magical Mystical TeacherJanuary 11, 2012 at 2:05 PM

    Thank goodness, not ALL brilliance is hidden! :)



    The Brilliance of the Builders

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  4. RiaJanuary 11, 2012 at 5:43 PM

    Two very different definitions of brilliance - both brilliant

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  5. G-ManJanuary 11, 2012 at 7:35 PM

    Written so sweetly...:-)

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  6. beccagivensJanuary 11, 2012 at 10:43 PM

    Reminds me of my proposal and ring!! Very nice ~~

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  7. Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog?January 15, 2012 at 9:54 PM

    Promises of life and love! Nicely done! :) By the way, I fixed your link - it was just to the main page of your blog, but it needs to be directly to your haiku.

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