Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Scare

Creeping from behind
Icy cold, surrounding me
Darkness settling in

A noise: what was that?
Eyes close. Heart beats faster. Boo!
Scream pierces the night.


6 comments:

  1. Both of your Haikus were Super Scary!
    I loved them ......G

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  2. "what was that?" seem just a normal interrogative sentence but you have this week's theme in mind, that truly is scary. Excellent haiku.

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  3. My sisters and I used to go into the woods at night..dare each other on who could stay the longest...there was much screaming and running...love your haiku..

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  4. This is great!! Well done ... you've captured it well!! I'm the first one out of there! :-)

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  5. Love this post...good work, felt the chills☺.
    Peace, Siggi in Downeast Maine, USA

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